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Hello! My name is Madolyn, and I am a critic for #FreeVersePoetry. Please don't be offended by anything I say, since it is all intended...


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This isn't beautiful
This isn't poetic
It's not a slow burn through my veins
or a flutter of nerves and emotions
It's a pulsing
and not even that
it's an ache
a desperation
a plea for help and a scream when none comes

You can't fight it, you don't want to
You don't accept it, you know you can't
    (you, meaning me)
    (you know that, right?)

So in the place of what should be
is a desperate ache
and oh
Fuck
I think it's what I wanted
but please
Just go away
    (wanted but never asked for)
    (unbearable but unlosable)

It's too pathetic for this many words already

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Madolyn
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Hello all. I am a teenage poet and writer who frequents deviantart with the goal to improve as much as possible. Feel free to browse around. Most of it is poetry, but there are some short stories and drawings here and there. If you're into fanfiction and fanart, try NovaMagma, my side account for fan works. It's rather empty, but there are a few gold nuggets to be found.

The original pic in my literature tag can be found here.
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:iconautumnforalways: won the final round of "Scratch That" for the poetry-book contest! I believe (s)he won with her piece "Collide" which is really good, and I recommend you read it!

Collide.There was a 
                   moment;
A beautiful,
                    blissful
                                 moment.
We weren't bodies,
                               We were souls,
 
Exploring our very existence.
 
And spirit met spirit,
And skin rushed across skin
As we searched each other's bodies for a deeper love within.
Your veins were a highway,
Your sighs soft and  d i s t a n t
As we sped faster into this lustful instant
Twisted and tangled, we were breathing as one
Collide.There was a 
                   moment;
A beautiful,
                    blissful
                                 moment.
We weren't bodies,
                               We were souls,
 
Exploring our very existence.
 
And spirit met spirit,
And skin rushed across skin
As we searched each other's bodies for a deeper love within.
Your veins were a highway,
Your sighs soft and  d i s t a n t
As we sped faster into this lustful instant
Twisted and tangled, we were breathing as one
Collide.There was a 
                   moment;
A beautiful,
                    blissful
                                 moment.
We weren't bodies,
                               We were souls,
 
Exploring our very existence.
 
And spirit met spirit,
And skin rushed across skin
As we searched each other's bodies for a deeper love within.
Your veins were a highway,
Your sighs soft and  d i s t a n t
As we sped faster into this lustful instant
Twisted and tangled, we were breathing as one
Collide.There was a 
                   moment;
A beautiful,
                    blissful
                                 moment.
We weren't bodies,
                               We were souls,
 
Exploring our very existence.
 
And spirit met spirit,
And skin rushed across skin
As we searched each other's bodies for a deeper love within.
Your veins were a highway,
Your sighs soft and  d i s t a n t
As we sped faster into this lustful instant
Twisted and tangled, we were breathing as one
Collide.There was a 
                   moment;
A beautiful,
                    blissful
                                 moment.
We weren't bodies,
                               We were souls,
 
Exploring our very existence.
 
And spirit met spirit,
And skin rushed across skin
As we searched each other's bodies for a deeper love within.
Your veins were a highway,
Your sighs soft and  d i s t a n t
As we sped faster into this lustful instant
Twisted and tangled, we were breathing as one
Collide.There was a 
                   moment;
A beautiful,
                    blissful
                                 moment.
We weren't bodies,
                               We were souls,
 
Exploring our very existence.
 
And spirit met spirit,
And skin rushed across skin
As we searched each other's bodies for a deeper love within.
Your veins were a highway,
Your sighs soft and  d i s t a n t
As we sped faster into this lustful instant
Twisted and tangled, we were breathing as one



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On another note, summer is almost here! That means I have two weeks to raise my grades. fuck Yay!
Also I need to start doing some more writing...

that's all for now :)
  • Mood: Lazy
  • Listening to: Crush 40
  • Reading: Sherlock Holmes
  • Watching: Supernatural
  • Playing: White 2
  • Eating: cheetos
  • Drinking: coke

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:iconlittle-lion-lady:
Little-Lion-Lady Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the watch! :3
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:iconpinktwirlz:
pinktwirlz Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You are very welcome (:
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:icondragthelegendarysmn:
dragthelegendarysmn Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Student Digital Artist
thanks for the faves :D
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:iconpinktwirlz:
pinktwirlz Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sure :)
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:icondragthelegendarysmn:
dragthelegendarysmn Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
dearest where have you gone...
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:iconpinktwirlz:
pinktwirlz Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
sorry, I don't log on much on dev anymore :(
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:icondragthelegendarysmn:
dragthelegendarysmn Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Student Digital Artist
its ok
calm down
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:iconpinktwirlz:
pinktwirlz Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
ha ok
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:icondragthelegendarysmn:
dragthelegendarysmn Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Student Digital Artist
thanks for the fave lol
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:iconpinktwirlz:
pinktwirlz Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yeah brah
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