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Hello! My name is Madolyn, and I am a critic for #FreeVersePoetry. Please don't be offended by anything I say, since it is all intended...


Hello! My name is Madolyn, and I am a critic for #FreeVersePoetry. Please don't be offended by anything I say; it's all intended to be ...

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Journal Entry: Thu May 16, 2013, 9:03 PM
First order of business, feature!
Since I am an admin for #poetry-book, I am going to feature the winner from the newest round of the contest!
The winner was ~AutumnForAlways and she won with Devil in the White Cry. Go check her out!
The Devil in the White City. He knew he was a wicked miscreation;
Diamond rings for monoxide screams, the monster's motivation.
He was born with the Devil inside, he claimed,
And it was Lucifer's work that he performed;
With each crimson drop upon this Gilded Age,
Another life was taken,
Unseen, forsaken,
A victim who would never be mourned.
 
He hid among the hosts of heaven,
A flawless angel in the City of White,
Preying on the dreamers and believers
Who knew not that they stood in the Devil's sight.
 
With a tip of his hat and a flash of a smile,
In the shadows of lies and the great white turnstile,
With fiendish charm did he deceive and beguile...
Yet under his angelic facade was a demon most vile.
 
Suffocation,
Mutilation,
Asphyxiation,
Exsanguination,
Each corpse was a disfigured tragedy...
A mother, a daughter,
A sister, a friend,
A woman deserted to agony.
 
Yet women were not quite enough to fulfill his sordid lust; 
Businessmen and children, in the Devil they did trust,
Fo
The Devil in the White City. He knew he was a wicked miscreation;
Diamond rings for monoxide screams, the monster's motivation.
He was born with the Devil inside, he claimed,
And it was Lucifer's work that he performed;
With each crimson drop upon this Gilded Age,
Another life was taken,
Unseen, forsaken,
A victim who would never be mourned.
 
He hid among the hosts of heaven,
A flawless angel in the City of White,
Preying on the dreamers and believers
Who knew not that they stood in the Devil's sight.
 
With a tip of his hat and a flash of a smile,
In the shadows of lies and the great white turnstile,
With fiendish charm did he deceive and beguile...
Yet under his angelic facade was a demon most vile.
 
Suffocation,
Mutilation,
Asphyxiation,
Exsanguination,
Each corpse was a disfigured tragedy...
A mother, a daughter,
A sister, a friend,
A woman deserted to agony.
 
Yet women were not quite enough to fulfill his sordid lust; 
Businessmen and children, in the Devil they did trust,
Fo
The Devil in the White City. He knew he was a wicked miscreation;
Diamond rings for monoxide screams, the monster's motivation.
He was born with the Devil inside, he claimed,
And it was Lucifer's work that he performed;
With each crimson drop upon this Gilded Age,
Another life was taken,
Unseen, forsaken,
A victim who would never be mourned.
 
He hid among the hosts of heaven,
A flawless angel in the City of White,
Preying on the dreamers and believers
Who knew not that they stood in the Devil's sight.
 
With a tip of his hat and a flash of a smile,
In the shadows of lies and the great white turnstile,
With fiendish charm did he deceive and beguile...
Yet under his angelic facade was a demon most vile.
 
Suffocation,
Mutilation,
Asphyxiation,
Exsanguination,
Each corpse was a disfigured tragedy...
A mother, a daughter,
A sister, a friend,
A woman deserted to agony.
 
Yet women were not quite enough to fulfill his sordid lust; 
Businessmen and children, in the Devil they did trust,
Fo


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~ambassador-brouwer 6 days ago  Student Filmographer
Thanks for the fave - I'm glad you enjoyed my work!
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You're welcome :)
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Thanks for the :+fav: :3
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Sure! :)
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~Adagiobunny May 11, 2013  Student Writer
thanks so much for the fave! i really appreciate it! :)
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=pinktwirlz May 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You are very welcome! :)
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*bloodawni May 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Just stopped by to wish you a happy birthday! :heart:
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Thanks a bunch! :highfive:
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*bloodawni May 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! And thank you for the return-llama :D
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